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Golden Falls

By strawman
A photo taken during a trip to the Brecon's. Views and comments are welcomed, positive or not. Does it work?

This was taken using a long exposure and a poloriser to kill off reflections from the water. The bright area at the top was caused by sunlight being reflected off a sandstone rock while the rest of the stream was in shade.

Tags: Long exposure Water falls Landscape and travel Brecons

Voters: Richsr, Kim Walton, NorthernEdge and 10 more


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Richsr 13 91 223 England
14 May 2007 3:13PM
Nice Image, like the composition with foreground and background interest, So It works for me. Regards R.
Kim Walton 17 145 30 United Kingdom
14 May 2007 3:16PM
works for me ---maybe a hint to where the golden colour was coming from.
strawman 17 22.2k 16 United Kingdom
14 May 2007 3:35PM
Thanks for your thoughts. there was a rock in strong sun light but it was very hard to get it in the frame without it burning out. I will have a look again into whether I could include some of it.
tepot 16 4.4k United Kingdom
14 May 2007 4:51PM
i like the wetness of the whole scene and the colours of the rocks, but the overall quality isn't there, can't quite put my finger on it but maybe it's noise or lack of sharpness?
KatieR 17 6.2k 6
14 May 2007 5:03PM
I love the foreground, but it feels a bit cut-off height wise. Perhaps that is because I can see that strong gold highlight.
dark_lord Plus
16 2.7k 735 England
14 May 2007 6:16PM
It does look a little 'closed in'. Letterbox formats do work, and I think would work here, but the bright highlight is the problem, especially as it's warm in colour and so draws the eye.
Craftysnapper 15 272
7 Jul 2007 10:53AM
I think it is a fine piece of work but for me personally the warm bright glow is a eye puller from the main center of interest (the waterfall and rocks).

Perhaps a selection from the opposite side and flipped and blended in to hide it would help, if this is not ethically wrong for you..just a suggestion.
tepot 16 4.4k United Kingdom
7 Jul 2007 1:09PM
i have to agree with crafty here, if this is a crop then maybe the inclusion of the light source would help?
SRSmith 13 1 United States
29 Aug 2007 11:46PM
Wow! Color and speed just couldn't be better. What a spectacular shot!

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