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By Sus  
Not too pleased with this but struggling to find anything to upload - I bleached out the background to just offwhite but think it lacks something. Any suggestions for improvement?

Tags: Portraits and people

Voters: tepot, mulder, himel and 4 more

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tepot 12 4.4k United Kingdom
5 Jan 2006 1:08PM

Quote:Any suggestions for improvement?

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MDR_Photo 12 872 England
5 Jan 2006 1:52PM
He looks a bit scared! More work needs doing on the left shoulder. Maybe some catchlights in the eyes?
Sus 12 3.2k 9 England
6 Jan 2006 1:28AM
Oh, I was hoping for sinister rather than scared! Thanks Michael.
francisg 12 705 1 United Kingdom
6 Jan 2006 2:28AM
It is a good head and shoulder portrait, but perhaps a little too moody for the guy's liking. He dosent look at all happy with the pose.

himel 12 61
6 Jan 2006 9:27PM
Is he realy afraid or u asked him to do so?

Sus 12 3.2k 9 England
7 Jan 2006 12:23AM
So another no-no for men who don't smile! I think this is his natural expression, but I will persuade him to smile next time. Thanks for the comments.
C_Daniels 11 399 10 England
7 Jan 2006 5:27AM
I think a dark background would have suited the expression more and enhanced the mood ?
mongogushi 10 50
17 Jan 2006 1:23AM
nice shot, great expression!
gajj 12 32
2 Jun 2006 5:50PM
Just absolutely in-your-face fabulous! Love it (sorry it took me 5 months to discover it!)

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