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Water Marks-III

By Tarachand

Tags: Digital art

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Grampy 9 507 71 England
1 Jul 2011 9:01AM
Tarachand, for abstract this is really abstract, very complicated and very hard on the eye, The composition with the two tomatoes each side and the tree in the middle is a bit naive , I'm sorry but it does nothing for me, may I sugest that you simplify a little this type of work, now art is a thing that many people don't agree about, so please bear in mind this is only my opinion.
Phill

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pamelajean Plus
13 1.2k 2082 United Kingdom
1 Jul 2011 1:03PM
Hello, Tarachand. There are a couple of abstracts in your portfolio that I quite like, but I am having difficulty understanding this one. Even the title doesn't help, and maybe some little explanation would help.
Pamela.
Davesumner 12 28 300 Australia
1 Jul 2011 3:23PM
Hi Tarachand,

Wow! I'm completely baffled with this shot, where's the water damage, what is the significance of the tomatoes and why is there a tree in the middle???

If you don't put a description you can't expect anyone to have any idea of what you were taking and what the intended outcome was, let alone write critique about it, we're not mind readers. SadSadSad

DaVeS
paulbroad Plus
11 127 1282 United Kingdom
1 Jul 2011 3:46PM
With the others I fear. Really can't see what you are trying to do or say and no info to help. Not for me and couldn't suggest improvement.

Paul
3 Jul 2011 5:01PM
Dear Phill, Pamela, Daves, Paul,
Sir/Madam, Thanks for your kind suggestions I am in the process to learn, this is a lesson for me, what I want to show is totally abstract, but your words give me an opportunity to improvise.

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