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Winter Thaw

By taso
Winter thaw on the shore of a creek

Tags: Rocks Spring Water Canada Black and white Specialist and abstract Close-up and macro

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CathR 9 151 564 United Kingdom
29 Apr 2008 8:51AM
I like the patterns made by the cracking of the ice but what bothers me slightly is that I don't have much sense of the scale of the shot. Maybe something to give the viewer a sense of how big the rock and the creek is would be helpful.

Catherine

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kalseru Plus
9 3 9 England
29 Apr 2008 10:47PM
Nice textures and patterns a bit more contrast and some sharpening may reveal a bit more of the textures ?
Andy
Tooth 11 5.8k 227 Ireland
4 May 2008 11:52PM
there's good potential here with nice patterns and textures. However I agree it's not immediately obvious what it is. A boost in contrast would certainly help. Compositionally i think the grey patch in the top right corner is a bit distracting asa it tends to drag the eye out of the frame

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