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mugshotmyk 8 3 9 United Kingdom
10 Jan 2013 7:08PM
As a high-key portrait I think you have done very well. However, I would like to see great contrast in the eyes, and so perhaps a delicate touch of burning-in would enhance her very lovely peepers. Generally I think you are on the right track.

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tazisdylan 10 1 10 United Kingdom
11 Jan 2013 12:01PM
Mike

Many thanks for your valuable and very constructive feedback - a rare occurence these days sadly I find on here. Your efforts are appreciated.

Best wishes
11 Jan 2013 10:30PM
Hi Jason,
I like the models expression and the high key treatment captures that very well.
One niggle, the crop of her hands, I would prefer to see all of the hand & fingers

Tim
tazisdylan 10 1 10 United Kingdom
13 Jan 2013 7:25PM
Tim

Thanks for the feedback and I totally agree about the hands.

Note to self - try harder next time! Wink

Best wishes

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