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Urban - face off

By tazisdylan
From the urban series, taken a while ago now! Wink Thought I had already posted this one.

As I posted this I noticed something that I'm not sure of...

But I'll let you have your say first.

Tags: Portrait Face Female Urban Portraits and people

Voters: Jaydee007, morpheus1955, RazvanD and 4 more


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saeidNL 9 3 Netherlands
2 Jan 2012 5:07PM
Those eyes are stunning
saeid

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Wow, great impact (I like the tight crop), great eye contact, from a very expressive modelSmile
Some people might find fault with the hands (not being connected to the model) but I think that they add to the impact.
I am not sure that I can see what you are not sure of....Wink
tazisdylan 10 1 10 United Kingdom
3 Jan 2012 9:55PM
Saeid - always nice to have your feedback - I may not know much about photography but I know the importance of the eyes in a half-decent portait, so pleased you found them striking.

Tim - thanks for the detailed comments and your thoughts on the hands. I was trying to get them more matched in position than they are but these models have nasty habit of moving. What I noted on upload was the graffiti line in the backround which I thought some may find distracting, in particularly the slight flash of 'black' to the top RHS of the frame above the model's head. And now I look again, the ring on hand to RHS of frame. - I know what it is, but due to the burn out it is not so obvious to those who do not know...
3 Jan 2012 10:27PM
Hi Jason,

I had noticed the black mark in the background but IMHO it doesn't distract from the modelSmile
I had'nt noticed the ring
Mikestu100 12 3 Scotland
18 Feb 2012 10:22PM
I think that as the model is so stunning and you`ve captured the eyes so well , I would never have noticed anything untoward.
The crop also works very well IMHO.Perhaps I`m not as observant as some people .But then again I`m mainly just looking at shots
on this site to decide if I like them or not.For me this is most certainly a `LIKE `.
mIKE.
tazisdylan 10 1 10 United Kingdom
3 Mar 2012 4:59PM
Mike thanks for your comments. I appreciate you taking the time.

Regards

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