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Old boat

By throgmorton
Please describe your photo here.Taken at Dungeness two weeks ago.

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Tags: Hdr Landscape and travel

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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.

Comments


Chinga Plus
5 3 1 United Kingdom
17 May 2012 10:21AM
Good subject! It's a good composition. I would give it a touch more contrast. IB

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banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3512 Canada
17 May 2012 4:10PM
It is a nice shot, and a good find.

Good points made above, and in addition, I would provide some more height by adding canvas and cloning in some sky.


Ive loaded a mod with straightening, contrast, and re composition with more sky.


Hope this is of some help.



regards



Williw
pamelajean Plus
10 964 1830 United Kingdom
17 May 2012 6:56PM
A wonderful subject, Roger, lots of texture and decay.
I think that the image would benefit from a bit more space on the right, which I have done in my modification. I also made a few adjustments in levels.
Did you change the sky, Roger? There are signs around the boat of something having been done, but I'm not sure what, and I don't think it's due to the HDR treatment.
Pamela.
paulbroad 9 116 1057 United Kingdom
18 May 2012 6:40PM
There are some strange artefacts in the beach on the right and, for me, a rather un-natural look. Too contrasty I think. I would have used a smaller aperture and slower shutter speed too - suspect a bit of over sharpening.

Paul

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