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Grass II

By TinHob
This is a second attempt at shooting this piece of grass (see me previous photo). Does this work any better?

Tags: Macro Flower Grass Black and white Flowers and plants Close-up and macro

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Richard707 16 14 United States
19 Jul 2007 4:23PM
I think it does work better. The focus was the main issue on the previous one. This has much better focus, although, it looks a little soft (did you not sharpen after resizing?). However, the softness works here, in my opinion, as it adds to the softness in light and texture. There's one thing that bugs me about the composition, though, it's what's in the left bottom corner. If it's not necessary, avoid the corners are they're strong points for anchoring eye movement. My eyeballs just move from center down to corner and stays there; it's a distraction. Anyhow, b&w conversion looks good and so does the exposure. Good job.

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