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Kayleigh

By tommermmv
Trying to create a fashion/urban type of shot here. Would like to know where it could be improved. Thanks
Tom

Tags: Fashion Black and white Portraits and people

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Eviscera 10 1.1k 149 United Kingdom
30 Jan 2010 5:45PM
Its a good location for this style !

Maybe just a bit of cropping and contrast (levels) was all that's needed.

Dave

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tommermmv 9 4 Ireland
30 Jan 2010 6:37PM
Thanks for the comments Dave,
Tom
paulbroad 9 117 1075 United Kingdom
31 Jan 2010 6:25PM
The uploaded mod is much better. A good shot and good idea let down by a less than perfect mono conversion. Is her face sharp - not sure, and it should be. A strong idea.

Paul
tommermmv 9 4 Ireland
3 Feb 2010 9:15PM
Thanks for the uploading the mod it looks much better. Could I ask how you were able to achieve the much better tones? I like messing around with mono and I'm always looking for ways to improve, the face even looks much sharper in the mod,
Cheers
Tom

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