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Super candid/urban image.Pin sharp detail and well composed.
Tom.
Tom.
Hi Ty,I like the urban idea but don't like how she's been cut off mid calf,If she stood roughly where he is but facing slightly turned as she is,then he could come from the rhs into the picture and look as if to speak to her in a natural way showing of the clothes and showing her with her legs properly,the logo that is there i think should appear somewhere in every photograph,the one on the pavement and use it as his label,trademark everything,his packaging,etc,sorry,i've lost the guitar somewhere,but that's what i think.Sorry about going on.Brilliant models,cool place,look and logo/label/whatever.Great work.Take care.Ann
thankyou for your kind comments,much appreciated.
thankyou for your kind comments,much appreciated.
artandfuture
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like it too much.
Guram.click
Guram.click
Good composition and there seems to be a story/scenario being portrayed by the models. More please.
Marian
Marian
interesting try... i would split the models to be able to direct the attention to each of them and to the...clothes.
i would try to avoid to cut the legs to the models as i believe a full image would have a stronger impact in the pro fasion photography. Also the windows in the left do distract me a bit.. i would try to get an uniform background.. the brick wall looks great here....show us more form this project....
i would try to avoid to cut the legs to the models as i believe a full image would have a stronger impact in the pro fasion photography. Also the windows in the left do distract me a bit.. i would try to get an uniform background.. the brick wall looks great here....show us more form this project....
Very good fashion shot. Well done! Ovidiu
