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Hanners 15 875 10 Ireland
19 Nov 2006 7:07PM
this is a great urban fashion shot.

Buffalo_Tom Plus
14 2.3k 14 Wales
19 Nov 2006 7:09PM
Super candid/urban image.Pin sharp detail and well composed.
thorn 16 124 2 Scotland
19 Nov 2006 7:46PM
Hi Ty,I like the urban idea but don't like how she's been cut off mid calf,If she stood roughly where he is but facing slightly turned as she is,then he could come from the rhs into the picture and look as if to speak to her in a natural way showing of the clothes and showing her with her legs properly,the logo that is there i think should appear somewhere in every photograph,the one on the pavement and use it as his label,trademark everything,his packaging,etc,sorry,i've lost the guitar somewhere,but that's what i think.Sorry about going on.Brilliant models,cool place,look and logo/label/whatever.Great work.Take care.AnnSmile
thankyou for your kind comments,much appreciated.
19 Nov 2006 9:59PM
like it too much.
Snapper_T 16 867 United Kingdom
19 Nov 2006 10:34PM
I think this works well, I'm not sure if there needs to be any interaction between the models to link them, or wether they look better as they are, but all in all a good fashion shot.

19 Nov 2006 11:53PM
Good composition and there seems to be a story/scenario being portrayed by the models. More please.

banehawi Plus
16 2.4k 4200 Canada
19 Nov 2006 11:55PM
Its got energy and attitude, - like it.

rosie42 16 7 Australia
20 Nov 2006 12:13AM
I like that the subjects aren't interacting - for me it adds to the edgy urban feel of this ...

Susie :o)
JohnH37 14 1 United Kingdom
20 Nov 2006 12:32AM
Like it.Captured an emotion between the two people as well.
20 Nov 2006 1:54AM
My attention is split I think between the two. Each could hold it's own in a crop.

tonymarq 15 1 United States
20 Nov 2006 2:13AM
Hey Ty very well done as the model is at front with person behind to add attention to the model! Hope your Friend does well!

stay well
Titi 16 Romania
20 Nov 2006 2:48AM
interesting try... i would split the models to be able to direct the attention to each of them and to the...clothes.
i would try to avoid to cut the legs to the models as i believe a full image would have a stronger impact in the pro fasion photography. Also the windows in the left do distract me a bit.. i would try to get an uniform background.. the brick wall looks great us more form this project....
beriah 14 1 Canada
20 Nov 2006 2:57AM
very cool models - excellent backdrop and lighting -would like to see all of her feet tho - still like it tho~
taggart Plus
16 47 14 United States
20 Nov 2006 3:00AM
Best wishes to your friend! Have a great Thanksgiving!

A Booth 18 11 4 United Kingdom
20 Nov 2006 11:51AM
superb - well posed models - excellent colour and composition.
Savvouri 14 3 Cyprus
20 Nov 2006 12:39PM
Love the attitude... very nice
luigitoi 17 5 1 Argentina
21 Nov 2006 12:45AM
this is great!, really liked it
cadman359 14 3
21 Nov 2006 12:50AM
cool capture love the attitude in the pose deserves an RA !
danmclean 14 1 Australia
22 Nov 2006 8:26AM
Your portrait work is coming on very well,, fantastic work and a lot to be learnt here from others about composition.
23 Nov 2006 7:11AM
Very good fashion shot. Well done! Ovidiu

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