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Made Up

By victoriasims  
Clown Inspired reject photo.

Tags: Black and white Portraits and people

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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.


25 Oct 2006 1:34PM
sorry, no critique from me, just admiration. like how the smudged out lipstick seems to distord her face and gives her a wry smile. excellent toning, great detail, outstanding photo

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ljesmith 13 1.1k United Kingdom
25 Oct 2006 1:51PM
Did you mean this to go up for critique? There's no suggestion I can make to improve this.
Johann 13 Canada
25 Oct 2006 2:08PM
This image is very dramatic, starting for the cropping, I am not sure if I would crop so close to the eyebrow, great textures and contrast, I love that you included the leaves, and you made the makeup look like the leaves. I don't think you need to improve this image, I would buy this image Smile
Philip Mc 15 7
25 Oct 2006 3:30PM
Excellent stuff, if a little contrived. You don't need to improve this image.
clevercloggs 14 237 2 United Arab Emirates
25 Oct 2006 3:31PM
I agree with the above that we are looking at a striking and well composed image.
Just wonder why the lh bottom corner is blurred. I would have expected a blurred leaf there resting on the body to creat depth. Just a minor niggle.
paulcr 13 1.5k 9 Ireland
25 Oct 2006 3:34PM
Well I couldn't improve it..! Paul
Westers 13 3.9k 1 Burkina Faso
25 Oct 2006 4:27PM
Maybe a slightly stronger catch light in the left eye (as you look at it)?

Brought Johnny Cash's version of NIN's "Hurt" to mind when looking at this.
POOCHIE 12 21 6 United Kingdom
25 Oct 2006 6:39PM
Such a strong image and the balance of the picture is really nice with the leaves forming a dark area to mirror the dark top left area, just a wonderfully planned and executed shot.

clintnewsham 13 121 1 England
26 Oct 2006 12:29AM
not much critique needed in this shot, it works just fine.
agree with Westers about the catchlight and i would remove the dots on the shoulder but other than that it works just fine.
got a colour vrsion.

nothing here.

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