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Eagle Owl

By Vince_S
Another taken on the wirral mid month

Tags: Pets and captive animals Wildlife and nature

Comments


Shroomer 13 14 167 England
28 Feb 2010 6:18PM
A lovely capture and well exposed and detailed on a good perch. Might have lessened the dof though to block out more of the bg plus what a shame the ears aren't raised
Richard
28 Feb 2010 7:10PM
super sharp image.ray
wideangler 11 8 Wales
28 Feb 2010 7:13PM
I think it's a great picture. My impression is that you could fill the frame a bit more with a closer crop because this picture is all about the bird - you don't need so much background - although I think you're correct to show more backround on the left of the picture (to 'follow' the bird's gaze). While you're cropping have a close look at whether the bird is upright, I think it is leaning to the right as we view it. So, I ould trim away the top and right and straighten it at the same time. I also think it would benefit from more contrast.
banehawi Plus
16 2.3k 4177 Canada
28 Feb 2010 7:26PM
Excellent shot Vince.


A couple of suggestion Ive incorporated into a mod.

Use canvas size to place the birds eye on a third, and provide more space to lok into on the left; using a 1 pix soft brush, add/enhance the eye catch lights; sharpen a little; add some more background blur; Ive also done a threshold/curves adjustment which has resulted in better contrast, and a very slightly different colour tone. Also, - changed the frame to be a little less heavy.

All this brings attention to the great bird shot.


Hope you find this helpful


Regards



Willie
28 Feb 2010 8:02PM
Hi Vince
I see what you meant about 'comments' being valuable. It's a good idea because there are some good pointers suggesting how to improve your image. I have picked up on the comments made and intend to give them a try. I like the sharpness, especially the eyes.
Steve
pluckyfilly 14 351 33 United Kingdom
28 Feb 2010 8:24PM
looks good in my book
Vince_S 11 10 England
1 Mar 2010 5:26PM
Thanks Richard and Wideangler for taking the time to view and comment. Thanks also to Willie for your comments and mod. Whilst my knowledge of photoshop will allow me to implement some of your suggestions with practice, I need to have a closer look at others and learn how to do them. I found all your comments to be constructive and helpful.

Vince
Steve_S Plus
15 183 3 United Kingdom
4 Mar 2010 10:17PM
A nice portrait Vince with great detail. I would just boost the contrast a little using levels adjustment.
Regards
Steve
Vince_S 11 10 England
5 Mar 2010 5:23PM
Thanks for the comment Steve.
Vince
FeatherFriend 13 38 217 England
6 Mar 2010 4:38PM
A great shot Vince, like Wills mod too,
Geoff.
SteveMoulding 11 3 7 United Kingdom
10 Mar 2010 9:54AM
A beautiful well detailed capture, Vince. IMHO the composition needs adjusting, a tighter crop but leaving the greater space to the left, similar to the mod but with less space above his head. I also think the contrast needs upping. I see from prevoius comments these points have been already made. I hope all these have been helpful.
Steve.
Lillian Plus
11 23 17 United Kingdom
10 Mar 2010 11:33AM
A great owl image, I see where some of the others are coming from Vince, I think that you have captured this well and Willie has done you a great bg in the mod.
well captured in my view
Lillian

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