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By WeeGeordieLass    
At the Jamia Masjid Mosque in New Delhi shoes must be removed before entering. Many people wash their feet too and, as I wandered around this fascinating place, I spotted these two ladies in perfect symmetry. I took a quick grab shot - I'm glad I reacted quickly as the next second their positions changed.

I know the settings in the EXIF aren't only excuse is that this was my first day in India and my head was in a spin with all of the strange sights and sounds I was experiencing - I wasn't thinking straight about my camera settings - just clicking away at all the fascinating sights!!

Constructive critique is always welcome and appreciated.

Thanks for looking

Elaine Grin

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mrswoolybill Plus
11 1.2k 1929 United Kingdom
23 Apr 2013 10:18AM

Quote:I spotted these two ladies in perfect symmetry.

But crucially you didn't take a perfectly symmetrical composition of them - that's the beauty here! Thinking outside the box, not going for the obvious. Your quick reaction implies an instinct for composition. I love the way the lettering on the left balances the figures.
I'd maybe like to see a bit more contrast - and that would make the lettering more important in the frame. Otherwise no criticism - and it's a shot that I'd love to have taken. Who needs fiction when real life can throw up interest like this?

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23 Apr 2013 10:35AM
A very good image makes you thinking , love it a lot !
NDODS 7 5.1k 125 United Kingdom
23 Apr 2013 11:28AM
An image which has been very well observed and captured at a moment in time which cannot be repeated. Great documentary photography.

Regards Nathan GrinGrinGrin
banehawi Plus
14 1.8k 3893 Canada
23 Apr 2013 2:32PM
Certainly a unique shot. I like the composition, including the English ladies sign is important to make sense of this, at least for me. It also does what Moira mentions, gives a mix of symmetry and asymmetry.

A little warmer again works better I think, along with contrast, and the shot just needs a little straightening.

Well done, a nice addition to your collection.


23 Apr 2013 7:24PM
Hi Moira,

Thanks for the great mod - it just goes to show, little changes can make a big difference.

I had loads of problems with the vertical and horizontal lines in this one. You've done a great job correcting them in your mod. I see you used the skew option...........I've not used that before but I'll use it in future so thanks for that tip.

Thanks for all your help.

Elaine Grin
23 Apr 2013 7:25PM
Hi Chen,

Thanks for taking the time to comment on my shot - I'm glad you like it.


Elaine Grin
23 Apr 2013 7:45PM
Hi Jeff,

Thanks for uploading your b & w's great. I think your conversion is really suited to the subject and the different tones are really nice.

Cheers for taking the time to do a mod for me.

Elaine Grin
23 Apr 2013 7:47PM
Hi Nathan,

Thanks for your positive comments - I'm glad you like the shot.

Elaine Grin
23 Apr 2013 7:58PM
Hi Willie,

Yes, a little warmer does look better, and the other changes are an imrovement too.

Thanks for your positive critique and showing how I can improve the shot.


Elaine Grin
mrswoolybill Plus
11 1.2k 1929 United Kingdom
23 Apr 2013 9:26PM
Skew gives you the greatest degree of control, because you can work on the corners individually. Remember always to use the Grid, and watch the effects across the frame - pulling one corner out will have a knock-on effect elsewhere and will often mean that you need to make subtle adjustments at the other corners.
23 Apr 2013 9:39PM
Thanks Moira, I'll have a play around with it Grin

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