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Grungy Shell

By WeeGeordieLass
This is v2 of an image I shot for the Macro Challenge. I like the colours of the shell but thought that the original image was boring (I've uploaded it as a Mod).

I thought I'd try adding a couple of grunge layers to add a bit of interest.

Please would you let me know if you think this works or not.

Tags: Close-up and macro

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Comments


paulbroad 9 114 1046 United Kingdom
29 Feb 2012 8:30PM
I normally don't like fancy surrounds, but this suites very well along with the colour. I would have put the shell bang in the middle though - this looks unbalanced.

paul

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Thanks Paul - I'm glad for the tip on the composition as that was the one thing about the image I didn't feel comfortable about.

Now that you mention it - yes it does look unbalanced doesn't it.

Thanks for this

Elaine
pamelajean Plus
10 964 1824 United Kingdom
2 Mar 2012 1:33AM
Namaste, Elaine.
I love my shells and enjoy photographing them. I take them down to the sea for an appropriate backgroundSmile.
Your background is like a frame, and I'm not sure if a textured background without the framing might look better, even with a bit of vignetting. I also think a little bit of shadow beneath the shell would bring it to life.
You have chosen a colour for the background that echoes the colour of the shell, and the whole image is therefore of the same tone, and the shell doesn't stand out. I have done a few mods with the background colour changed, using quite a low opacity. In those I sharpened the shell and added a drop shadow.
But in my first mod, I adjusted levels in order to bring out the beautiful colours of the shell, and then, instead of moving it more to the left in the frame, I gave it a small friendGrin in my second mod.
Pamela.
Namaste Pamela,

What a great idea - putting the shell in it's naural environment with the sea shore in the background. I love your shell images in your pf....my favourite is the "Bullmouth Helmet".

Thanks for all the time you have taken to show me how to improve the shot. I particularly like the last one in the series. I can see how using a different colour for the background is better for helping the shell to stand out.

I also like the "Mummy and Baby" version. It balances the shot nicely......and it's cute!

Thanks for sharing your ideas with me Pamela, and giving your time and advice so freely.

Loads of oms

Elaine
JackAllTog Plus
7 4.4k 58 United Kingdom
12 Mar 2012 9:17PM
Yess i like it loads - very nicely done.
Thanks Stuart, the encouragement is much appreciated,

Cheers

Elaine

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