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Life Lines

By WeeGeordieLass
I thought this ladies face looked full of character and I zoomed in to get a close up.

I've been practicing with setting the black and white points and I think it worked quite well with this one.

Shot in harsh sunlight - middle of the day at the Kumbh.

Any constructive critique is welcomed.

Thanks for looking.

Elaine Grin

Tags: General Landscape and travel Portraits and people

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S_Psharma 4 1 India
16 May 2013 2:28PM
An excellent image very well captured.

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Coast 8 1.6k 292 United Kingdom
16 May 2013 2:36PM
Elaine this is a lovely candid portrait with bags of colour and contrast to bring out the detail in the subjects face. I think the levels work on the highlight and shadow points have been well executed here.

Contrasty lighting which cannot be helped and I would suggest just a little work on the eyes to brighten a tad. Otherwise another great addition to the ever expanding travel portfolio.

If not already planned you should think about exhibiting these or putting together a photo talk show for local clubs and communities when you are back.
cats_123 Plus
12 4.6k 26 Northern Ireland
16 May 2013 3:41PM
very well composed and such wonderfully strong colours Smile
mrswoolybill Plus
9 985 1499 United Kingdom
16 May 2013 6:12PM
It's a fine, strong, dynamic portrait of a sturdy character. The placement and crop, the diagonal sweep of her shawl, and the direct gaze, all bring her to life, they give her a sense of energy. We could easily engage her in conversation here.
I agree with Paul about brightening the eyes a little. I also want to get rid of the dark detail top right, there's a sliver of another face I think and I find it draws my eye away from the main subject. I'll be back with a Mod.
banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3529 Canada
16 May 2013 7:08PM
A very nice portrait, framed well.

The right can be cloned in to isolate the woman; to me, she appears a little too yellow, so Ive addressed that; the facial lines need to be accentuated IMO, - shes earned them, so contrast is good for this; I would de saturate the background a little.

Loaded 3 mods. First is as above with the lines more visible, tone altered, and crop; secong is a very harsh version which uses a style by a photographer called Andrej Dragan though its barely close; and finally a lightly toned mono, which I especially like.


paulbroad 9 116 1064 United Kingdom
16 May 2013 7:09PM
You have processed this one spot on. A fine well composed and cropped candid portrait. Full correct tonal range. Might just slide the dodge tool across her eyes.

First class.

Hi Everyone,

Dr Sharma - Thanks, I'm glad you like the shot.

Paul (Coast) - Thanks for the advice about brightening the eyes.....your mod shows the improvement - I'll certainly do that, thanks. That's a great idea of yours to exhibit the images in some way. I hadn't thought of doing anything like that but I know my local library sometimes show exhibitions of local artists work - I might contact them.............thanks for the idea.

Jeff - Thanks for taking the time to comment - glad you like it.

Moira - Your mod looks great with the dodging and burning - much better too with the top right-hand distraction cloned out - thanks Moira.

Willie - 3 great mods Willie. I agree that the lines could be accentuated a bit more. One of the versions I worked on but didn't upload was a bit more gritty - a bit more like your 2nd mod. I've checked out Andrej Dragan's website.......very compelling images although there were a couple which I felt, to me, were uncomfortable viewing. The guy has amazing talent though. I love your 3rd mod - she does look good in b & w. I'm going to try a conversion, but I doubt it'll be as good as yours.

Paul - I agree about lightening the eyes - thanks for your advice - I'm glad you like the shot.

Thanks very much for all of your help and advice everyone - It's a great learning opportunity for me GrinGrin

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