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Contentment

By Wellspring  
SB800 soft box, with SB600 snooted lighting background
f/5 1/25sec - slow speed to expose ambient lights correctly
65mm

Tags: Portraits and people Flash and lighting Christmas girl pretty content

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Comments


Carabosse 18 41.5k 270 England
27 Dec 2008 2:23PM
A potentially appealing photo but perhaps with elements competing with the main subject for attention. Getting in a bit closer or zooming in a bit may have helped. Alternatively you could crop the picture as in the mod I have uploaded.
pamelajean Plus
15 1.5k 2214 United Kingdom
27 Dec 2008 4:36PM
The portrait is excellent, but the out-of-focus areas on the left are quite distracting, as are the yellow spots to the right of her face.
Wellspring 12 86 37 England
29 Dec 2008 11:24PM
Yes I agree with your comments about competing elements.

I was trying to take a portrait in context of Christmas but I think i failed here somehow.

I do like the crop though - it keeps the elements but makes the image stronger - I will be adopting that with the original for sure.

Back to the drawing board!

Many thanks for your comments and suggestions
John

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