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By wupohan
Shot in Los Cabos, Mexico. Dec. 2011.

Tags: Specialist and abstract Landscape and travel

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banehawi Plus
17 2.7k 4282 Canada
19 Jan 2012 4:29PM
I think that your inclusion of the bright sand at the bottom has caused the major part of the shot to be underexposed, so for me it doesnt work well. The eye is drawn to the sea and the rocks, and the bright bottom part leaves the shot unbalanced.


best if its cropped off, the the upper part adjusted for exposure and colour, as in the mod.



regards


Willie
paulbroad Plus
14 131 1293 United Kingdom
20 Jan 2012 2:02PM
The tonal range has you beaten here. Burnt out whites in the waves and blocked up shadows. Would have done the same on film. Possibly less exposure for the waves, then work on the even blacker shadows but I think the subject is going to cause too many problems.

Paul

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