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Hms Belfast

By yamahaman
Taken a long while ago before upgrading to dslr. Would like to no all your views on how it could look better. What its lacking or missing etc

Tags: Landscape and travel

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pablophotographer 5 684 270
12 Jun 2012 12:31AM
Let me think....

Perfect weather to camouflage a war vessel.

Nice ankle of shooting. It looks positioned o.k.

I can't say if you chose the camera settings. You may had, just some.

Conclusion/Suggestion: I could probably use the 1/5th of the bottom pf the pic, which shows the sea, to add it to the top so it shows the sky and shows the vessel and its relation with the sky, (a fighter or a helicopter landing or taking off would make it more engaging). Getting closer and shooting from below would be interesting also, but deadly dangerous.

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banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3558 Canada
12 Jun 2012 3:39AM
Its quite a decent shot Robert I like the pov this is taken from. My late Uncle served as a gunner on this ship during the Korean War.

A few suggestions. The shot is not level and needs a clockwise rotation. Its a little flat, typical of a small compact, and with a little work on contrast it gives the shot some life.

A little sharpening completes the tweaks, and all this is included in the mod.

if you are familiar with Levels in Photoshop. and you look at levels , you can drag both end sliders inwards to meet the graph which gives it a boost.


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Hope this is helpful,



regards



Willie
neonknight 12 1 United Kingdom
12 Jun 2012 6:24AM
Nice effort although this i not Belfast,Belfast was a battlership from the second war and this is a modern day helicopter assault carrier,John
paulbroad 9 117 1077 United Kingdom
12 Jun 2012 7:27AM
Not the Belfast - the Belfast is moored near the tower in London and is a cruiser with 12 six inch guns. A decent image but the weather conditions do not help and there is a little under exposure. Brighten things up a bit for a big improvement. The river bank makes it look like there is a slope, but looking at the ship, I think all is OK in that department.

Paul
12 Jun 2012 9:46AM
Great shot, but this is not the Belfast. I think it's one of the laid up carriers. Most likely the Ark Royal, one of the three anyway. It has the ski slope so it has to be one of them
yamahaman 4 10 United Kingdom
12 Jun 2012 10:50AM
Thankyou all for the comments. And a big thanks to banehawi for the mod and yes the picture was a little flat, and you have improved it in your mod thanks and for
all the info you gave.
And sorry to the rest for getting the ship name wrong its actually shot when i was in grennwich .

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