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a picture of emotions

By youmightlikethis
does this work if not how can I improve it could it do with a closer crop

Tags: Photo journalism General Black and white Portraits and people RACE FOR LIFE 1 450D 60MM MACRO

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banehawi Plus
11 1.3k 3353 Canada
21 Apr 2014 12:36AM
Its a very nice shot Ian. I think the desire for a closer crop may be to remove or minimize the lady behind on the left. But you dont have much space for a crop. Maybe blurring is a useful alternative.



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Willie

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thanks for crit
paulbroad 8 108 988 United Kingdom
21 Apr 2014 8:36AM
You should have either all or none of the lady on the extreme right. The tonal range is good on this one.

Paul

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