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DOGDAY AFTERNOON

By youmightlikethis
one for the bin me thinks too much grab and not enough shot

Tags: Photo journalism General Black and white Portraits and people Humour and fun

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Mollycat Plus
3 11 2 United Kingdom
27 Apr 2014 9:23PM
I'll take the one of the left.

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28 Apr 2014 1:04AM
The only thing that bothers me is that you've chopped off a head. And the tops of a few other heads. Love the look on the real dog looking at the sculpture dog. Like the little girl too. I don't think V2 helps. If this is a crop at the top I'd put a bit back in the shot.
28 Apr 2014 3:53AM
thanks
paulbroad 9 116 1057 United Kingdom
28 Apr 2014 8:26AM
Too much going on again, Ian. Too many distractions. I prefer the mono as the colour version is a touch flat, but your processing on the mono is a bit obvious and patchy. Particularly obvious is your dodging on the main figure which spills out round him. You need to use an much enlarged image and a smaller brush.

Paul
mrswoolybill Plus
9 967 1494 United Kingdom
28 Apr 2014 3:58PM
Very funny observation, my sort of take on life. I'll stick with V1, the crop in V2 is too tight, the image isn't sharp enough on the dogs or the man to support such a close crop.
Moira

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