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funny ha ha

By youmightlikethis
three recent pics up for crit so do any of the images convey a funny message do you smile

Tags: General Humour and fun

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AnneB50 4 118 18 Scotland
10 Oct 2013 9:12PM
Three really interesting people shots Ian, I particularly like V3, looks like they would all like a sip of the pint!

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paulbroad 9 116 1056 United Kingdom
10 Oct 2013 9:48PM
All interesting, although I'm not sure that I understand v1. V3 is exceptionally good. V2 amusing.

Paul
mrswoolybill Plus
9 965 1493 United Kingdom
10 Oct 2013 9:53PM
This is what I miss out on, living in a small town... Sigh...
Trying to look at these objectively -
V1, I wish you had allowed just a bit more space. They look cramped, particularly left and right. I suspect that you've toned down the colours in those background flags/whatever, I'd maybe go a bit further. Or preferably straight b&w. Oh and can someone teach them to march in step?
V2 - I find the processing a bit distracting, particularly on the background. The background should be just that, it shouldn't jump forward at us...
V3 - Again a bit tightly cropped, it would be good to see more hands.
Thanks for some good laughs. I enjoyed these.
Moira
10 Oct 2013 9:54PM
thanks for crits
JackAllTog Plus
7 4.4k 58 United Kingdom
11 Oct 2013 10:30AM
Love them, V1 to me leans to the left to much for me, the camber of the road is there but the photo is still tilted down on the left. I might have used a black inner border for more punch too on v1. V3 is wonderful.

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