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IF WISHES WERE FISHES

By youmightlikethis
old waverley trip pic taken somewhere in middle of nowhere

Tags: General Black and white Landscape and travel

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saeidNL 7 3 Netherlands
12 Apr 2012 7:51PM
Beautiful images,V1 is for me,today,
saeid

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12 Apr 2012 8:09PM
Love the sharper contrasts and greater range of tones in V1. Wonderful composition btw and a great arty feel and quality.

P.
Jestertheclown 8 7.4k 249 England
12 Apr 2012 8:56PM
I'll go against the grain, (sorry!)
I prefer V2.
ams99 Junior Member 5 65 9 England
12 Apr 2012 9:15PM
Version 2 nails it for me.

Cracking effort
Leilani 12 29 3 England
12 Apr 2012 9:36PM
V1 is much more striking! Lovely Smile
Sooty_1 6 1.5k 220 United Kingdom
12 Apr 2012 9:48PM
I like both for different reasons. V2 looks like an old albumen print, whereas V1 is more like newsprint, ie Tri-X push processed and printed hard.

I also like the fact that they break most of the rules. The horizon is almost central, there is no defined foreground interest, the leading lines lead away from the subject, the shot is way too contrasty and sharpened for a landscape shot and the "grain" almost overpowers the rest.

On the other hand, the shot is moody, atmospheric and....different. You usual treatment of sky and contrast works in this case, adding to the effect rather than destroying it.

Nick
janeez Plus
8 1.7k 8 United Kingdom
13 Apr 2012 12:21AM
Either version is fine to me but I would look closely at the composition. The spire of the church is very central and may benefit from being slightly to one side. I would crop the RHS to the large tree and mak this my full stop if you like. As these image are quite grainy the addition of a border would be good to give a feeling of age to the overall effect.
janeez Plus
8 1.7k 8 United Kingdom
13 Apr 2012 12:31AM
Mod uploaded
thanks for crits and mod

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