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By youmightlikethis
how could I improve this shot of tourists outside a museum

Tags: Photo journalism General Black and white Portraits and people

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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.

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16 Apr 2014 6:41PM
I think this is really good. I can feel for them being lost. I may have cropped just a bit more off the right up to her arm. And burned a touch on his socks, they are a bit bright and draw the eyes. But I love the feeling in this.

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Mollycat Plus
2 11 2 United Kingdom
16 Apr 2014 8:39PM
How do you burn socks !
banehawi Plus
11 1.3k 3396 Canada
16 Apr 2014 9:51PM
This is very good Ian, well done.

The conversion is quite good, and the amplification of noise by cropping so much works for me. In fact, in the mod, I added a bit more.

Since its zoomed in, the exposure will need to be adjusted, as the camera set its exposure with the larger scene. Its quite a bit underexposed, despite that coat, the mans hair, and the the socks being very bright.


So thats the suggestion and the mod, brighter overall except for the brighter parts mentioned above.


Regards



Willie
thanks for crits and mods
cats_123 Plus
12 4.5k 26 Northern Ireland
17 Apr 2014 8:05AM
like the situation and the poses...have had a go at a tighter 1x1 crop Grin

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