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THE PREACHER

By youmightlikethis
three shots with with the same message does this message come across and in which version

Tags: Photo journalism General MARCH 1ST

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banehawi Plus
13 1.6k 3677 Canada
29 Jan 2014 4:41AM
I think V1. You cant escape the C being either Cancer or Cigarette, and if theres any doubt, the message is there in the text.


The others are good shots, but the message is not as direct and obvious.



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pablophotographer 6 769 291
29 Jan 2014 5:50AM
Coincides with the passing of the 'Marlboro Man', Eric Lawson, although I have to say there are millions of more less known victims.

I shall agree with banehawi, but I also read this as 'Cigarettes Cause Cancer' which is more compact message.
There is no reason to me to tell somebody it is a dirty habit and imply there are dirty or 'why burn money'. Why photographers buy new cameras? Because they can, or because they like it.

Innovative framing on V2 and strong colour in V3. The Passer by should be heading away form the ciggie butt as supposedly being the person who put it down. It could also be called 'Put it down' or 'Leave smoking behind you'.

That's me done.
pablophotorapher
Rogerex 11 32 12 Australia
29 Jan 2014 7:08AM
All good images, but if the aim is to discourage smoking, then V1 is really the only one giving that message to me.
Roger
paulbroad 9 123 1161 United Kingdom
29 Jan 2014 8:34AM
Decent images. V1 is best as a message. I would have endeavoured to have the cig a bit brighter with a glow still there and a wisp of smoke to give maximum message.

V2 needs the cigarrette highlighting better. Difficult to see.

V3, would have got closer to the bin top making the cig butts much larger and thus more obvious.

Paul
mrswoolybill Plus
10 1.1k 1689 United Kingdom
29 Jan 2014 10:21AM
V1 is the poster, the campaign, it fits your title. The other two are more to my taste as photographs though, they are the bigger picture. Neglect of self goes with neglect of the environment.
Moira
chase Plus
11 1.1k 246 England
29 Jan 2014 5:16PM
The message comes across to me much better in V1,straight to the point & unmistakable.
Love the 'Big C'...which in some circles is the 'name' for Cancer.
Plain & simple but well thought out.
The other two versions are not quite so straight forward & the message seems to get lost in the image for me.
Thanks for crits

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