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By youmightlikethis
trying to convey lonely feeling serenity solitude which of the three do this if any

Tags: General Landscape and travel Balloch 2

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Mollycat Plus
4 11 2 United Kingdom
27 Nov 2013 9:09PM
Three good images. Would the bench on its own work any better, with the ships reflection to the right. Might gives more of an impression of loneless rather than solitude. You would know best. Peter.

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mrswoolybill Plus
10 1.1k 1766 United Kingdom
27 Nov 2013 10:25PM
V1 is intriguing. There are three different areas, different worlds, all deliberately ignoring each other. The groynes, the bench, the ship.

I'm imagining just two - the bench and the ship. Ostentatiously avoiding direct eye contact. More oblique, less informative...

I do like the total lack of horizon, water melts into sky. That's important.

There's a dark blob in the sky, probably a bird but it's really annoying me, it has to go.

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