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VESSELS THREE

By youmightlikethis
three images of the same scene which one is better and why

Tags: Photo journalism General Transport Landscape and travel

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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.

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kojak Plus
3 14 United Kingdom
16 Mar 2014 7:56PM
Nicely done. Grin

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LynneJoyce Plus
8 20 99 United Kingdom
16 Mar 2014 8:02PM
Lovely scene very sharply captured but the verticals need sorting in all three shots.
16 Mar 2014 8:18PM
thanks for crits and mod
16 Mar 2014 8:20PM
V1 for me, would make a great composition when straightened
16 Mar 2014 8:54PM
Hi Ian, I do like V3, it would benefit from a slight anti-clockwise adjustment, but you can only do this if the original allows, because of the tight crop, otherwise a fine image,
Fred.
chappo1 8 4 7 Australia
16 Mar 2014 9:54PM
The middle one for me as the boat is not taking the eye out of the image in the foreground. It has some room around it....john
Mollycat Plus
3 11 2 United Kingdom
16 Mar 2014 10:06PM
At least this created comments.
Mike43 5 17 21 England
17 Mar 2014 9:09AM
I think all 3 suffers from poor composition, in as much that the main part (the boats) of the photo is fine it is just the top part where you can see the houses should not be there. Have uploaded a quick mod where I have cloned some part of the houses out and burned in the rest, I know it is not a great piece of work but just to show you what I mean.

Apart from the above comments it is a great subject, I don,t know if you live near but if you do I would go back and retake the photos not forgetting the box to stand on, (I often find if I can,t find a box the Dog or Wife is a good alternative for a box)
It would also make a very nice mono picture??
Mike.
paulbroad 9 116 1056 United Kingdom
17 Mar 2014 6:37PM
V3 for me. Strong and simple. The text on the other two adds nothing and wastes space.

Paul

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