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whats wrong with this photograph

By youmightlikethis
grab shot just of the mile in Edinburgh so how can it be improved [a brief return to the crit gallery before anyone notices]

Tags: Photo journalism General Portraits and people Humour and fun

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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.

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banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3510 Canada
28 May 2014 7:07PM
Its a nice shot Ian, nothing really wrong with this.


When I download it and look at it in PS, it suggest a little more brightness on the ladies, - just a little; it seems that window frame influenced exposure a tough.

Uploaded a mod with this done, and a small increase in contrast.

Good work.


Willie

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dark_lord Plus
12 1.8k 326 England
28 May 2014 7:36PM
Well Ian, essentially nothing, there's a connection between the two and the conversation is clearly animated, which you've caught well.

You uploaded this as part of a series very recently and it was one of the images I quite liked.
A good subject for mono, but in this case I have no preference.

While the reflection in the window does give some scene setting information, the image itself just concentrating on the two women is stronger. It's the human interaction that interests the viewer, location is somewhat secondary.

Keith
Mollycat Plus
3 11 2 United Kingdom
28 May 2014 8:10PM
Your at it again.
29 May 2014 4:11AM
thanks for crits

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