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ye old mast

By JLynam
any ideas on how to improveand what i could o done ta make the image better

Tags: Transport Close-up and macro

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KarenFB Plus
10 4.7k 169 England
29 Aug 2012 8:05PM
I like the treatment you've given it, but a shame the modern lamp is in shot - if I were to print this image I think I would clone it out. Smile

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Jestertheclown 8 7.4k 249 England
29 Aug 2012 9:13PM
Hi Johnathon,
Rather good isn't it?
I have to agree with Karen though re. the light and I think too, that I'd fill in the bottom corner, or crop the RHS.
Also, although it doesn't bother most people, someone will very likely want you to remove your name from your image.
Hope this helps.

Bren.
JLynam 6 4 Ireland
29 Aug 2012 9:59PM
II have the name because people could easily copy and paste your image also the image is resised i do however have copies without it so if they want to use it they email me
Jestertheclown 8 7.4k 249 England
29 Aug 2012 10:52PM
Hi Johnathon,
I understand why your name is there but some people on here believe, rightly or wrongly, that names should be removed.
Personally, I'm not concerned by it. It's your image, it's entirely subjective and you can do with it as you wish but you also need to be aware that those same people that you think might steal your image can remove the name, leaving the image looking as if it had never been there.
I could do it in seconds.

Bren.
Focus_Man 6 481 631 United Kingdom
30 Aug 2012 9:22AM
There has been much discussion about logos on images and as Bren says, they are easily removed. Discussion also raised, should it be stolen and used, are you prepared to spend 250.00 per hour in attempting to be paid a fee of perhaps 15.00?

I feel all EPZ images are better appreciated when presented as most members do, without the added text within the critique gallery in particular where you have asked the question 'how can I make the image better'.

The image itself does show some promise, but thought needs to be applied when considering the content, as per two comments above.

Frank

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